First Draft & Feedback.

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These are the notes I made during the tutorial with Anthony whilst he reviewed my first draft.

  • Consider including ‘construction of notions’ in title.
  • Introduce Jeff Weiss – who are they?
  • Be consistent throughout – advertisements, advertising or adverts?
  • Introduce David Ogilvey, ect. Bring the listener with you.
  • When first referencing someone, use their full name.
  • More emphasis and detail on visual analysis, talk more about the photography within the advert.
  • Material covered about digital manipulation within adverts can be referred to in definitive blog post/bibliography.

After so much upset and struggle, I was so unbelievably relieved to hear from Anthony that the paper I had written so far was good. It made me excited to make the next changes and move on to making my presentation.

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~ by victoriasimkissphotography on February 3, 2015.

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